What kind of mix-up results in two
strangers moving into the same flat on the same day, each believing it
to be theirs alone? Writer Peter Souter doesn’t seem to know, nor to
care: once he has brought his protagonists together, the premise for
their collision discreetly evaporates. Souter’s interest is in the
first hour of this pair’s relationship (Act One) and the last (Act
Two), hence the title.
It’s fairly schematic. At first Juliet is arrogant and
self-dramatising, Alex stoical and nerdish, and in classic tradition
their verbal sparring suddenly magicks into a full-on snog. At the end,
as they divide up their belongings, she is sadder and wiser, he has
gained in self-insight but also in reticence. Each act contains one
other character: before the interval, Juliet’s ex-boyfriend decides not
to oblige her by toughing Alex up, whilst afterwards the woman who
helps him move his boxes turns out not to be his “new popsie”, as
Juliet puts it.
This is Souter’s first stage play after a career writing for television
and radio, and to say that it looks like it would be glib but not
inaccurate. It is concerned only with the amusement of the moment,
whether that amusement be of the chuckly or the sobby variety. There is
no weight to the piece, not even the emotional substance it aims for;
if an over-reacting spectator were to tearfully blow their nose, they
would blow the play away as well.
Director Tamara Harvey, normally reliable at doctoring weak plays with
deceptively stronger productions, for once fails to get much out of her
cast. Shaun Evans is plausibly restrained as Alex, but not much range
is required of him. The surprise is Miranda Raison, who surely knows
better than the superficial operatics of her Juliet in Act One. Yes,
this is Juliet’s temperament, but it looks as if Raison is doing this
shouty singsong by nature rather than in calculation; Juliet may have
had ten years or so to grow more sober for Act Two, but there has been
no groundwork laid in Raison’s performance for this maturing. On its
move into Hampstead’s main house from the downstairs try-out space,
this play feels simply over-exposed.
Written for the Financial
Times.